I am now busy rewriting all of the earlier text and will post a complete book draft in June. Thank you all for your thoughtful and generous comments on the Google Docs to this point--all of which are now grievously out of date and so closed for further comments.
Here is a Google Doc of first draft of the preface/introduction of "Everyday Habits of Systems Transformers."
Please give your specific comments in the Google Doc and any general comments in the comment section below.